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Music is More Important Than Sport

What do you think? Do you agree or disagree? Are there ideas to support both sides of this topic? 

Write to persuade your reader of your ideas. 

Think about: 

• what your reader needs to know about the topic 

• how you are going to introduce the topic 

• the order of your ideas and how you link them 

• what to include in your summary. 

Remember to: 

• choose your words carefully 

• take care with your spelling, punctuation, and sentences 

• edit – add or delete words or sentences to improve your work.
  
  

Start your writing here: I disagree because sport is more important than music and if you're just listening to music it will be a waste of time listening to music and listening to music is bad for your eyes and like when you're doing your work wheel listening to music you could get distracted from your own work because it is too loud to do your work and it is affecting other people’s work because your music is too loud people get distracted from their learning. It's more important doing sport than listening to music and you could get depth because it is too loud but if it's not it still can be distracted from their learning because of the screen of the music that they're playing that is distracting. Sport is more important than music because it is good for your health and body so you are more healthy than before. Like when you listen to music it’s just a waste of time doing nothing but listening to music like that's boring just listening to music how about getting more healthy